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©2009 ~Sakuyuki
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"Goth in the grass"

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This has to be my first submission in months, for that, I'm really sorry. The only reason I went out and organised this shoot, apart from wanting needing to get out of the house, and having to take photos for a brochure I'm making as part of my course.

The concept was quite simple, anything with a model in it, so here it is.

Model Gorgeous Gwen, :icontears-of-angels:
MUA/Hair/clothes Gorgeous Gwen and myself
Photography by me, taken with a Canon EOS 500D

Comments are very much appreciated, please give me your thoughts and feedback so I can improve!

ALSO: on a sidenote, if you are ever looking for alternative models/photographers/designers/hair and makeup people, check out [link]

All of this is copyrite me. This image is not free for use for anything. If you wish to use it as reference you may, but no editing is allowed without my written (or typed) permission

Thanks! :)

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:iconkallipolis:
I really like it. She does look quite gorgeous. I like the black theme. The things I would do differently, i'd luck that big piece of grass in front of her, I feel that it kind of distracts from her. Also, i'd get rid of those dead branches in the background. I think it'd make the shot more...mystical. I'd also zoom in on her a biiiit more just to make her more of the center of attention. But I really like it, I like the spot you chose and the big tree is interesting.

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Philosophy Nerd:heart:
:iconsakuyuki:
Thankyou, I definantly want to get her out again and do another shoot so I can improve on this one!

Your comments are always so helpful! thanks!

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...during blank sex :noes:!
:iconkallipolis:
I'd love to see it!

Anytime Miss Lauren!

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Philosophy Nerd:heart:
:iconsakuyuki:
dead grass

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...during blank sex :noes:!
:iconmoonshadow87:
Goth with gum tress in the bg ftw xD

But seriously, it's a really awesome shot!
To my rather non-experienced eye, the lighting is really nice ^^ But, you could do away with the bits of grass in the foreground, maybe ^^;

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~*~Something Wicked This Way Comes~*~
I am the moon. I dimly light the road, and the only thing I can do is point it out to you.
But when you all take that one step forward, I will gently, quietly watch over you. ~Gackt (Jihaku)
:iconseph018:
Beautiful shot! Love her outfit, the pose and the background sorrounding very much!

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"Most people think, time is like a river, that flows swift and sure in one direction. But I have seen the face of time and now I can tell you, they are wrong. Time is an ocean in a storm...

Just call me... Kakulukiam."
The Prince
:iconsakuyuki:
Thankyou

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...during blank sex :noes:!
:iconseph018:
You're welcome! :)

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"Most people think, time is like a river, that flows swift and sure in one direction. But I have seen the face of time and now I can tell you, they are wrong. Time is an ocean in a storm...

Just call me... Kakulukiam."
The Prince

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Canon
Canon EOS 300D DIGITAL
1/400 second
F/14.0
30 mm
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